Susumu Takiguchi / Special to The Daily Yomiuri
For the past three months, we have examined senryu. Now let
us return to haiku and start a series of studies under various
broad themes--beginning today with the theme of water. Water
permeates the world in many forms and provides a rich source for
haiku. Let us start with Carol Raisfeld's beautiful haiku:
almost dawn
the first snow
becomes the sea
Raisfeld lives near a beach, as her address--Atlantic Beach,
N.Y., on the southern edge of Long Island just outside New York
City--shows. She is lucky enough to be able to walk along the
water's edge just before the day begins. She saw the first snow
begin to fall and as each white crystal hit the water it became
part of the sea. "Becomes the sea" may be slightly exaggerated,
but is effective in depicting this magical phenomenon. A big
landscape haiku a la Buson.